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Credit where its due, there is a strong narrative to the event in your piece.
It would benefit from having another story happening (to cut to) and compress the fire into one episode. Corrie has used things like a sing-song or party at the Rovers as a counterpoint to the heavier or more shocking story happening at the same time. Doing this also allows you to 'cheat' the passage of time much more easily. That would be essential. The blaze itself would probably be on screen for 15 minutes MAX. Think how dull it woud be to see the same house burn night after night. On the other hand, the aftermath could run for days.
I haven't bothered to write it in, but different scenes featuring key characters involved in current storylines (i.e. Tracy/Ciaran) would be interspersed with the fire, if you read the episodes, the first description is for Sunday's, and of course - the last three, Monday's. Overkill, I know, but hey - this is ITV. OH - and the residents would be in some sort of party, I imagine.
Gavin Scott posted:
BBCNicky@Yorks posted:
Well, that's nice.
It's just that I didn't want to put too much info in just one or two episodes.
It's just that I didn't want to put too much info in just one or two episodes.
Credit where its due, there is a strong narrative to the event in your piece.
It would benefit from having another story happening (to cut to) and compress the fire into one episode. Corrie has used things like a sing-song or party at the Rovers as a counterpoint to the heavier or more shocking story happening at the same time. Doing this also allows you to 'cheat' the passage of time much more easily. That would be essential. The blaze itself would probably be on screen for 15 minutes MAX. Think how dull it woud be to see the same house burn night after night. On the other hand, the aftermath could run for days.
I haven't bothered to write it in, but different scenes featuring key characters involved in current storylines (i.e. Tracy/Ciaran) would be interspersed with the fire, if you read the episodes, the first description is for Sunday's, and of course - the last three, Monday's. Overkill, I know, but hey - this is ITV. OH - and the residents would be in some sort of party, I imagine.