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I think that might have more to do with regional dialect, which I actually find quite endearing ...
Brilliant Job I thought. Well put together. Good pace and natural in your delivery. You strike the right balance of being serious enough yet pleasant. You need to work on your pronunciation of 'th' so that 'thousand' and 'thanks' don't sound like 'fousand' and 'fanks', but otherwise all the best!
I think that might have more to do with regional dialect, which I actually find quite endearing ...