Vision - Menu

Here's a random video mock, I just did recently, its basically a 'Now, Then and Later' programme menu for a fictional TV channel called Vision. It's deliberately 16:9 safe, btw.

http://img69.imageshack.us/img69/5884/vmenumock640.jpg

Any thoughts?
[OLD]


EDIT - NEW - A tweaked version here:


http://img849.imageshack.us/img849/7017/ydjk.png

Different music deffinately I think, just light and fluffy, a bit like what ITV1 have currently and if I were you I'd think about slightly altering the logo just o it doesn't look so iffy?...

Not bad. I like the sliding line to show the now, next and later. I agree with the other user in that the logo should have the 'V' made out of the same size circles.

Thanks for the comments so far, in regards to the music, I didn't want to go for music typically used by channels; instead I went with a Future Garage track, I disagree about it being in the same league as ITV1's music. In regards to the logo, that was made roughly 5/6 years ago, the circles are the same, but I flipped the 2nd row around, because at the time I felt it didn't quite look right, I sort of took inspiration from this:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cUKwmI-v5VA

However I appreciate the suggestion.

The key to success is to take other peoples suggestions on-board to improve your work, think back to the GAP fiasco last year, they designed a new logo, people didn't like it so they changed it! Sometimes other peoples views, you may not agree with, but just try it out and see what it looks like. Instead of just saying, I disagree, try it, if you don't like it ok just see what it's like!

Hang on a minute.. I was simply explaining why the logo looks that way. I accept the criticism that it looks odd now . I still can't fathom how a dance track sounds like ITV1's droney music.

I was just saying, try it out. If you don't like it you've always still got your original!

How do you know he hasn't?

Which indeed I have:

Ok then, I prefer that, but if you don't fair play, I just wanted to see what it would be like!