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Aaron_2015656 posts since 11 Mar 2015
Westcountry Spotlight


Updated, final GMB Mock. Added the clock and ITV News has been added between each story on the ticker. I've taken on every single bit of feedback and used it in this design. Please comment if you leave a rating, a rating with no comment is no use to me. I'd love to hear your feedback, I've worked incredibly hard to refine my design and make it perfect.
Last edited by Aaron_2015 on 9 April 2015 7:08pm - 2 times in total
DanielK3,222 posts since 1 Oct 2011
STV Central Reporting Scotland
Good design, nice animations but definitely not for GMB. The current graphics employ the logo shape in multiple ways, I don't see that here and it is disappointing. These seeme to be very recrangular and don't seem to be as interactive with the brand as the current set is.

Brilliant design like I said, but not GMB.
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Aaron_2015656 posts since 11 Mar 2015
Westcountry Spotlight
I'm sticking with the font. It looks good in my opinion. Suggesting a different font would be more worthwhile.

Thanks for the kind words DanielK.

SRS, your comment is totally useless. Doesn't tell me how to improve at all.

I wouldn't call it boring, the transitions creating an interesting effect.
FrancisIdents (previously FrancisTaylor) 302 posts since 2 Mar 2014
Central (East) Look North (Yorkshire)
SRS, your comment is totally useless. Doesn't tell me how to improve at all.

SomeRandomStuff is not known for handing out constructive criticism.


I'd prefer to see the Reem for the astons. While the font is fine, it doesn't say ITV to me.

The animation is a good start, though I'm not sure I like where the orange "Top Stories" aston wipes in from. Instead of hurtling in from the side, I'd prefer it to wipe in from behind the GMB logo.

Apart from that it's not a bad mock at all, with some polish it could be great. 3 stars.
dosxuk3,684 posts since 22 Oct 2005
Yorkshire Look North (Yorkshire)
It's literally a five minute job to get a copy of itv reem suitable for this type of usage, and doesn't involve anything other than a web browser and visiting two sites. If you can't work out how to do it, frankly nobody should help you as it's that simple.
It's spelt AERIAL!
Aaron_2015656 posts since 11 Mar 2015
Westcountry Spotlight
It's literally a five minute job to get a copy of itv reem suitable for this type of usage, and doesn't involve anything other than a web browser and visiting two sites. If you can't work out how to do it, frankly nobody should help you as it's that simple.


Do get off your high horse. Rolling Eyes

I searched for ITV Reem and couldn't find it. If I couldn't find it, I couldn't find it.


Due to help from David and FrancisIdents, I now have ITV Reem which I'll be using in the next development of this design. What else needs to be improved though? I continuously get poor ratings, but not a lot of explanation as to what needs to be improved.
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