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You've spent a maximum of 1 hour 22 minutes on that mock. I'm guessing a lot less though. And it shows.
It's obvious as well that you think the stand out thing from wally's mock is that there's a noise filter applied. It's not. The noise is part of a much wider set of effects added to make a complete image. If you don't recognise them, or don't know how to apply them, don't apply the noise. It just makes your poor mock look even worse.
It's obvious as well that you think the stand out thing from wally's mock is that there's a noise filter applied. It's not. The noise is part of a much wider set of effects added to make a complete image. If you don't recognise them, or don't know how to apply them, don't apply the noise. It just makes your poor mock look even worse.

