You’ve deleted two out of the three mocks you’ve done. I saw your original post and I’ll agree with the point that it was a bit dull. All you posted was a title card, two versions of a coming up menu and the endboard, you need to spend more time on developing a wider range of graphics, Name straps, backgrounds, etc. You say ‘Sunday Live’ is a spin-off Of ‘This Morning’, depending on how uniform you want the two shows to be, why don’t you start by doing a very basic recreation of the TM graphics (just to get a feel for the layout and how things fit on-screen). You can then change things such as the colour pallet or the shape, brand details (e.g. the blue and gold ‘ribbons’ could be changed for a different shape, to make Sunday Live stick out from This Morning but still create a uniform look).
Don’t be disheartened if you get bad feedback, I personally believe when you start posting mocks, the poster believes their work is the best thing ever, but most of the time is proven wrong and get negative feedback, resulting in the poster being quite sad or quitting without giving it a go, keep going and over time you learn to accept the feedback and you eventually develop a mock that you expect to see on TV, even I admit that the first mocks I made were quite poor, but I stayed at it and put a lot of time into creating new mocks which get good feedback, I still get negative ones, but they’re there to help you out. Be persistent, the edit button doesn’t mean ‘erase’.
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