Slash TV - Local News v2

If anything the angle of the astons should be the same as the logo.

Interesting but I would suggest the text in the coloured boxes (Breaking News, Sport and 7 Investigates) needs to be bolder.

Also the Social/#Slash6/Headlines text is white on light blue. Hard to read.

The font weight is very hard to read on big screens, let alone smaller screens. The strap alignments look sloppy.

EDIT: Still working on it.

Firstly, I should say that compared to the very first thing you posted on The Gallery, this is an improvement.

BUT -

The two main points you've received so far are:

(1) The shapes should 'slope' at the same angle as your Slash logo.
(2) The text needs to be bolder in order to be easily readable.

Your update doesn't solve either. Take on board people's feedback and your work will improve.

Nope, still ignoring suggestions.

I can't do #1, believe me I've tried.
I have been working away at #2 and am eager for you to see it now.

I'd love to see a break caption for these channels.

I'd have:

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Be right back

Wouldn't it be easier to change the angle of the logo? It can't be that hard to draw a new straight line.

I guess you're using PowerPoint and a generic preset parallelogram shape. Either change the slant of the logo as said above or just use a rectangle with triangles plonked on the end. I think you might be over thinking this a bit.

Your wish is my command.