It was far too simplistic for me, and the box with the circle in it doesn't really work. Stick to boxes or circles. Also make sure you edit your videos properly (PowerPoint in vision at the end).
- The 'AM' is not centred
- The ticker is jumpy
- There's a random yellow box above the aston
- There's too bigger gap between the logo and clock
- Everything is too big
This is far and away the best thing you've posted.
Look into the typefaces, though. Why is 'BREAKING NEWS' different to the rest?
The AM is misaligned.
The clock and ticker(?) look nicely sized and aligned but the 'TOP STORIES' is too large.
Keep going. You're getting better. Compare this to the first thing you posted on here and you'll see why the comments were initially unimpressed.
RH
richard h
Have to agree this looks a lot nicer than anything else you have done. The previous thing above looks awful in comparison but the text sizes on that are not far off looking right. Id also make the top stories, ticker and the clock the same font size and line them up. Maybe make the padding round the clock smaller too so you can fit more text on the ticker.
As said above, definitely the best work you've posted here but:
-Make the blue background smaller to fit the top stories text. I'm not a fan of the blue as it doesn't seem to fit with the rest of the package.
-Logo is still misaligned from the centre of the clock
