I didn't really like it. The whole thing looked rush and that no offence)
Firstly, you need to imagine "how would this look on TV" aand looking at it, the shapes are jumbled up and in diffrent sizes. You also dont need any fancy animation, maybe use slide in or what ever it's called or fade in. I would have also added in some outline to maybe make look tidy and good.
Sorry if I upset you with these but I am only trying to help you in your way.
Hopefully you will use these suggestions.
The Tuesday 6-9 Show With Michael
(Hopefully) on Burnley College Radio.
lukeshep and Ne1L C gave kudos