Sorry but this mock reeks of iOS 7 (and not in a good way). Horrible gradients, seemingly random font choices and what's with those colours!! Brown for a TV channel logo?!!? Really poor.
That CBBC logo mate is shockingly bad. I wouldn't expect it from a new designer let alone yourself who can design really good stuff when you put your mind to it.
The whole mock is one big let down for me, and it definitely wouldn't work in a real life situation.
2/5
iOS 7 was certainly not something I was going for, not a fan of those gaudy gradients, but I was trying to be more subtle with them, but for logo mocks, flat is probably better.
Sorry Martin but if I were you, I'd stick with doing BBC News. I don't see this working on television.
2/5
I'll try not to take that in an insulting way

I am more than BBC News recreations (At least I think I am!)
I think it would be wrong at this point for BBC Sport to drop its distinctive black and yellow colour scheme, along with CBBC and CBeebies (especially CBeebies' now well established brand) to drop their individual and distinct branding.
I am quite fond of the Cbbc Logo as it happens, but I was trying to leave nothing behind. But as you say there are some distinctive colour schemes that perhaps should remain in "the cull"
I like the concept, but the execution perhaps requires some work. Orange for BBC News overall, not really a good colour in my view. Same with the Brown for BBC Politics, which I guess is a renamed BBC Parliament, and the charcoal grey for BBC Sport don't really suit either brand in my view.
Good choice in using Futura Bold, think it's been under-utilised as a font for a while and looks quite strong, yet warm and friendly too.
I must admit though, I tend to prefer the idea of giving each channel a stronger individual identity even within the corporate whole. But overall, it's pretty good, 6/10.
The font choices I am happy with, even if they are not to everyone's tastes here. They work with the logo type, have character, stand out, and are bold. These are some of the qualities the BBC lack at this time.
The alteration of the block spacing seems to be largely unnoticeable, especially at the size you've used the logo at in the designs below.
It is subtle but I felt I should (normally I would not touch the BBC logotype itself as experts made it!)
I think the font choice here is poor. It only really fits in BBC Three's image - probably because of its history with heavy-weighted fonts. Bold still generally means brash, and it really doesn't fit in with BBC News, BBC Four, or even BBC One.
The image for channels like BBC One and BBC Two is dull, dry, and boring. So much has changed since 2006 and 2007, and the BBC is no longer seen as authoritative and frankly as trustworthy as it once was. It needs to get its confidence back, shout out about successful shows like Sherlock, Doctor Who etc. Be playful and grab attention.
awfully-named BBC Politics
European and American politics has as much schedule time as live coverage of the Houses of Parliament. So Politics is shorter and still accurate to what is shown. Neither name is the most amazing, but thems the breaks!
BBC News had to settle with a putrid orange, and BBC Three gets a totally unsuitable teal. BBC Sport is the only one that really works, but it does mean scrapping the distinctive black and yellow colour scheme - which would be a real shame.
I chose Orange deliberately to move BBC News away from the red it has adopted for over 10 years now. But not into the boring Blue or Purple territory. The Orange in Version 1 was perhaps too bright, so in Version 2 I changed it.
I don't see that Teal is unsuitable for young people. BBC Three as a channel is a huge mess, and so it needs to find who it is, and the teal need not be the only colour used for the channel itself, its just a primary colour.
Sport is back to Yellow and Black, but feels not so different to what they have now, but it seems thats what people want. Being black, it could have had more flexibility with colour combinations for the various sports.
The CBBC and CBeebies look terrible - it's best to keep them completely in the corporate style, or create a completely different brand for them. CBBC and CBeebies are some of the most distinctive BBC channel brands, and to throw them away for these tacky adaptations of the corporate brand would be silly.
I agree for the most part, so in Version 2 I pull them out a bit more from the other channels.
Oh dear - those BBC blocks are flying everywhere! They need to be kept in one place. Otherwise, I think these web brands are largely redundant.
The BBC iPlayer logo is poor. The i-with-arrow device is really important for iPlayer, and if you extracted it from your logo, it would look terrible. The "i" and the play symbol are disconnected, and it's all the worse for it. Under this system, I'd have got rid of the play symbol altogether.
Finding one placement for the BBC Logo with those web brands, does mean some of them come off as looking unbalanced, but its a point people have picked up on so its changed for Version 2
BBC iPlayer's logo is odd, it doesnt follow anything else at the moment, so I tried to bring in some subtle version of it. I have tweaked it in Version 2, but not sure if its as distinct as the current. Then again, does it have to be, now it is so established?
The better logos here break away from the house style, and I think aptly demonstrate the fundamental problems with this mock.
Overall, I'd score this mock as 2/5. The technical execution and the work involved moves this up from a 1/5 to be brutally honest.
The International channels have the benefit of not appearing alongside other channels, so do not need to co-exist or match together.
Also I respect your honesty. I always prefer constructive criticism, rather than praise or insults. Thank you for breaking your comments down as well so I could address them here.
Martin you're rushing out an update and the design is getting worse. Sorry, but it is. The new update is 1/5 because of the CBBC logo. I've saw better from some of the new designers on this forum.
Edit: Seriously look at those logos - f**king vile. Surprised you'd put your name to them...
Again, I will not take your comments in an insulting way. I happen to disagree, but each to their own.