Rediffusion: Carlton Style

Taking a break from the C3N videos this is again a very rough draft as I'm testing different ideas The premise is that in 1996 Carlton bought Rediffusion.

Yes I know the star at the end is naff. Advice Comments and constructive criticism welcome please.

https://youtu.be/xoQ5WEYCGH8

Ridiffusion?

Um... Not quite sure where to start here.
I would probably argue that if you think the star is "naff", then it probably shouldn't have gone on the video. You might have done better to reauthor it sans star.

As I said these are very rough drafts.

A rejigged version with no star and correct spelling:

https://youtu.be/PrQhdEs9Hoc

Struggling to see the point.

There isn't a point. As I said in the C3N videos I'm trying various ideas and getting feedback.

1. I would keep the name "Rediffusion" in the middle and not sort of off center.

2. I would stick to the Carlton style ident as that what it's ment to look like.

I had to move "Rediffusion" to off centre because when the "Lond" of London was phased out and the "Rediffusi" of Rediffusion was phased in the "I" of Rediffusion and the "O" of London overlapped"

So animate the ON to move to it's new position, or have LONDON off-centre.

I did move the ON already