Recreating the ITV News theme music

Here's version 2 of my ITV Regional News remake. I've worked on building the percussion and melody.

http://files.jamescraker.com/Music/ITV%20News%20Regional%20Remakes/ITV%20News%20Regional%20Remake%20Version%202.mp3

Link: http://files.jamescraker.com/Music/ITV%20News%20Regional%20Remakes/ITV%20News%20Regional%20Remake%20Version%202.mp3

Far too many elements are missing in this version that appear in the original. You've also left in parts of the national theme that don't appear in the regional theme.

Leaving aside the usual problems, this one needs a lot of work to sound authentic, or even pleasing to the ear.