SR
You need to be clearer as to what is actually your work. In the case of this mock... not much.
1/5 - No originality. Poor Execution.
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1/5 - No originality. Poor Execution.
NOTE TO ALL MEMBERS
If you're trying to match the standard of Excellence in mocks on this forum, I am not convinced that Powerpoint is an adequate tool for the job.
I highly recommend Adobe Creative Cloud - Illustrator, After Effects and Premiere are now within a reasonable price range for those seriously interested in pursuing this sort of graphics based work as a career. There are even Student Discounts to get the whole suite of programs for £15 p/month.