Next time I do such mocks, maybe I could make this
You can spot
1. After the 'If you can see this message' there are two elipses, but where it says 'we cannot provide the HD service' there are three.
2. There is too much words. That's all I can say.
That's it. I am so fed up.
I get the impression that you want to hear something along the lines of "this is an excellent mock, a wonderful concoction that looks just like it would have done on ITV1 and you can have 5 stars of 5 for it".
Well I'm sorry but that isn't how the Gallery works on here. To quote from the Guide to Mocking link at the top of the forum page:
when you finally think there's absolutely nothing else you can do [to improve your mock], only then post the mock. If you've followed the advice given in [The Guide to Mocking], then other members will actually take the time to give you their opinion, and maybe some constructive criticism. Alternatively, if you ignore the tips and tricks given in this thread, expect the other members to give you hell. You've been warned.
And if you are given criticism, take it on board. Don't claim that you'll listen to other people's ideas and comments if you'll just ignore them, and then pretend they gave you rave reviews and continue to produce monstrosities - others may spot flaws you don't. And who knows, if you do all that, they might even praise you!
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