Apart from the split screen - which I think the two screens are too rotated, everything is pretty good. Although I'm not keen on the current look, this would be an improvement.
Also I think the title could be improved a bit, not sure exactly what it is, but just doesn't seem right.
Anyway a 4/5 from me - a fair amount of work seems to have gone into these.
I appreciate your feedback. Do you mean the logo is a bit small on the titles?
Also I agree that the split screen could be improved, it looks out of perspective.