As a concept (which is what this is), it's fantastic!
Obviously it would need refining (such as more realistic textures on the clock hands) and the logo probably ought to form up in the centre of the screen - perhaps inside a semi-transparent turquoise box?
The only thing I don't like is the name. I would perhaps call it 'ITV Late Evening News'. Other than those minor criticisms, I think these titles are incredibly well thought out.
Big thumbs up from me!