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ID
Identity
My last ITV Mock didn't go down too good so I have now scrapped that one and ive chosen to give at a new brighter look. Here is the first draft of ITV 1
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This is the very basic version, I'm making the animations and that now.
Feedback welcome
JA
james
My last ITV Mock didn't go down too good so I have now scrapped that one and ive chosen to give at a new brighter look. Here is the first draft of ITV 1
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This is the very basic version, I'm making the animations and that now.
Feedback welcome


Fantastic. Honestly you have improved so much! I can tell you have spent a long time creating this mock. 5/5
DB
dbl
STOP. This screams powerpoint.
CH
Channel56
I know that I'm new to the forum and all, but it's not very good. All you've done is get a picture of some clouds from Google Images, copied and pasted some pictures off of the ITV website, put a box over the bottom of each picture stating the name of the show and the times and found the ITV1 logo, put it on the bottom next to 'The brighter side'. Four steps which would probably take you about four minutes. Sorry, but I'd give you a 2/10.
JA
james
I know that I'm new to the forum and all, but it's not very good. All you've done is get a picture of some clouds from Google Images, copied and pasted some pictures off of the ITV website, put a box over the bottom of each picture stating the name of the show and the times and found the ITV1 logo, put it on the bottom next to 'The brighter side'. Four steps which would probably take you about four minutes. Sorry, but I'd give you a 2/10.


Pot, kettle, black.
ID
Identity
james posted:
I know that I'm new to the forum and all, but it's not very good. All you've done is get a picture of some clouds from Google Images, copied and pasted some pictures off of the ITV website, put a box over the bottom of each picture stating the name of the show and the times and found the ITV1 logo, put it on the bottom next to 'The brighter side'. Four steps which would probably take you about four minutes. Sorry, but I'd give you a 2/10.


Pot, kettle, black.


I was about to say the same thing James, and Channel56, if you read what I wrote you'll see it says 'first draft' so this is the basic layout
Last edited by Identity on 16 October 2011 4:53pm
JA
james
james posted:
I know that I'm new to the forum and all, but it's not very good. All you've done is get a picture of some clouds from Google Images, copied and pasted some pictures off of the ITV website, put a box over the bottom of each picture stating the name of the show and the times and found the ITV1 logo, put it on the bottom next to 'The brighter side'. Four steps which would probably take you about four minutes. Sorry, but I'd give you a 2/10.


Pot, kettle, black.


I was about to say the same thing James, and Channel56, if you read what I wrote you'll see it says 'firsst drafr' so this is the basic layout


Exactly!

Here is the definition of firsst drafr:

'firsst drafr' means you can't be arsed to make a better version so you post the first design online knowing full well it is rubbish.

Commonly spoken on message boards, people often say they are doing a 'tvmocker14' when posting turd on an internet forum.

1) 'Sorry guys, I cba to redesign my rubbish mock, so I have stuck it online anyway.'
'Oh, you are doing a tvmocker14.'
JO
Jonny
and Channel56, if you read what I wrote you'll see it says 'firsst drafr'

Exactly, clear as day.
DD
DarkestDreams
I know that I'm new to the forum and all, but it's not very good.


Are you and tvmocker14 the same person?
CR
Critique
Dear, god...

There's little point of posting a 'First draft'... A first draft is for your eyes only, as you develop the mock to meet a certain standard. This is very bad. It's perfectly neat, but it's a glorified stock image, with some press office photographs on top of it.

This needs a total rethink. There used to be a thing where people's mocks got better as time wore on - you're doing a good job to disprove that theory.
AG
AxG
OK, it's not using safe area. Also yellow on white does not work. Next is fine, but I'd prefer times, not then or tomorrow.
ID
Identity
here's the video version

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