HRT News bulletins

Hello, I'm new here.

I've designed a lot of mocks so far, just for myself, but I didn't know there was a place where I can actually discuss and share them. So here I go *lol*. Since I've been into Balkan topics into a considerate amount of time, television became one of them, that's how this mock actually came into existence.

If you want to know what HRT news actually looks like, check out this link http://www.hrt.hr/index.php?id=enz&tx_ttnews[cat]=119&cHash=d7f45f87cb (don't even bother to check other editions, they look completely the same)

As I've said, I've been doing these for a lot of time, it's actually an old one, that's why it's still 4:3. Hope you'll enjoy anyway. If not, at least please tell why. Hope to share more soon.

(mind you, it's a long image)

Hi! First of all, welcome to the forum! Second of all, wow! This is fantastic! My only comments would be to change the outside of the text on the top left hand side. Something about it doesn't seem right... Finally, that horizontal line in the center looks a bit strange IMO. Besides that, it's a brilliant mock! 4/5!

Top left hand side...? You mean the captions? These are not a part of the mock (I thought it was needless to say, silly me). I'm just too lazy to upload and link up so many images. That's why these are there.

Oh sorry! Ignore what I said.