I'm not sure that this is an improvement over what's already on TV at all to be honest.
Safe areas - you still need to work on this:
Everything should be in the 16:9 title safe area at an absolute minimum. So you need to move the ticker up quite a bit. Ideally, critical graphics (like the clock) should be in the 4:3 area so that the old dears who don't have their TVs set up properly can see it.
Your text alignments are all over the place, so you need to work on this too.
Personally, I don't like text and straps going directly in to the logo either.
A key question to ask yourself is: "would these work on TV?" As it stands, the answer is no.