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GOOD MORNING BRITAIN, Studio and Graphics (March 2014)

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HJ
HJL
end of the day of all the places in britain it just needs to show a few more of those but not bad though

What you on about??
ET
ETP1 Forever
This thread really isn't recommended if you've been awake for over 24 hours
TE
Televisionbigfan
My point is just because the show will be good morning britain it doesnt mean that they will have places of britain in its titles
HJ
HJL
xwing posted:
This thread really isn't recommended if you've been awake for over 24 hours

What was the point in this comment??

My point is just because the show will be good morning britain it doesnt mean that they will have places of britain in its titles

Well then you've got two separate ideas then because your previous comment was suggesting that there was too much of a heavy affiliation with London, which is a comment I made on a different mock, and can't understand what that has to do with this mock??
DT
DTV
I am really loving the Good Morning Britain mocks at the moment mainly because it gives me something to smile about. 3 Themes have emerged from them.
1 - There are three evident opinions - 1: 'Senior' Members who generally have a distaste for these low quality mocks, 2: 'GMB Mockers' The people who made these GMB mocks, mainly ASO and henry96 seem to spend most of their time arguing with each other about their mocks and 3: other 'New' Members who seem to like these mocks.
2 - They are all or seem to be low quality PowerPoint mocks or PowerPoint mocks.
3 - They all borrow heavily off each other.

I will now criticise this mock using my new 5 points structure.
1 - Skill: Simple how skilful is it? Not really that skilful, simple rectangles or circles often with a mismatch of fonts.
2 - Safezones: Does everything fit in the safe zones? This is one of the inconsistencies with this mock
3 - Looks good: Does it actually look good? Not particularly - it seems to be either bright in your face yellow or dull blues and greens and some of your mocks have about 3 different fonts in them and many of them have borders when have any News Graphics had different coloured borders?
4 - Brand Inkeeping: If it is adding to an already existing brand is it inkeeping with that brands style? This is sort of irrelevant to GMB mocks.
5 - Likelihood factor: Would this ever be put onto the air? Think about it, then come back to me on this one, would ITV ever use any of these.
HJ
HJL
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XA
Xalasaur
The colours you've chosen for the straps are a bit garish (especially that black-text-on-red) and it just looks overall Powerpoint-y with not much going for it. It is hard to believe that this is 'a few weeks work', it just appears rushed.
Think, can you see your mock realistically being used? If not, don't be disheartened, spend some time developing your ideas until you can.

24 days later

HJ
HJL
It's been a while since I've uploaded anything onto here, and have taken the mock back to the reds that people want! I have spent a a lot of time with a pencil and some paper drawing lots of ideas, and this was my favourite. There is a lot to come from this mock, as long as I get some positive feedback, otherwise its back to the drawing board!

Thanks for all your feedback in advance; and I hope you like it!
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EDIT: and I've already noticed the 2015 type, but never mind!
DK
DanielK
It's been a while since I've uploaded anything onto here, and have taken the mock back to the reds that people want! I have spent a a lot of time with a pencil and some paper drawing lots of ideas, and this was my favourite. There is a lot to come from this mock, as long as I get some positive feedback, otherwise its back to the drawing board!

Thanks for all your feedback in advance; and I hope you like it!
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EDIT: and I've already noticed the 2015 type, but never mind!

I quite like this, although is the colour of the date and names invertable? It wouldn't work if you were captioning a correspondent on a live shot who is wearing a dark coat... The only other thing may be the red colour, its swaying to close to brown for me.
HJ
HJL
I quite like this, although is the colour of the date and names invertable? It wouldn't work if you were captioning a correspondent on a live shot who is wearing a dark coat... The only other thing may be the red colour, its swaying to close to brown for me.

I had anticipated the Date and names to only appear like this for the opening of the show, and maybe post-ad break. I have a bar that would appear if they were out on location, or if for any reason it wouldn't work at this point in the programme. Im really pleased that you like this Idea, and I'll work with the red colour.

Cheers
DK
DanielK
I quite like this, although is the colour of the date and names invertable? It wouldn't work if you were captioning a correspondent on a live shot who is wearing a dark coat... The only other thing may be the red colour, its swaying to close to brown for me.

I had anticipated the Date and names to only appear like this for the opening of the show, and maybe post-ad break. I have a bar that would appear if they were out on location, or if for any reason it wouldn't work at this point in the programme. Im really pleased that you like this Idea, and I'll work with the red colour.

Cheers


One other thing - rather than 'Ben Shephard and Susanna Reid', IMO, ' Ben Shephard Susanna Reid ' would look better, obviously being lined up with the camera shot.
DK
DanielK
The forum won't let me put in the spaces, basically like BBC News etc.

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