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GOOD MORNING BRITAIN, Studio and Graphics (March 2014)

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tweedledum
Yep, needs more warmer colours. Dont go mad, but have some more orange and reds. As I have said, get rid of the AM bid and just have '07:00' and maybe put it in a heavier font? Not a huge fan of the title card TBH, but it isnt bad! Well done
HJ
HJL
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I have changed the blue, which I agree did look cold, having changed the colour!
If you could give me further feedback that would be great, as I want to make it look TV worthy.
I am in the process of changing the Title card, but want to give it some time and thought before I post it!!
Cheers.
GM
gmb2014
A massive improvement. It looks SO much better compared to the first version.
JO
Jonny
Stop. Stop now.

Go through the mocks forum and click on any thread rated 4 stars or higher.

You're not spending enough time on your work. As well as a lack of understanding of what would look good on TV, there is no cohesion or clear evolution between your designs, the typefaces selected or even just the basic shapes used.

You're just throwing stuff out there and seeing what sticks.

Step away, take a look elsewhere.
HJ
HJL
Okay, so having looked at a few mocks, surprisingly few highly rated when you look at actual mocks rather than re-creations.

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Last edited by HJL on 11 March 2014 12:15pm
AP
applemask
Maybe he's just trying to enjoy himself with his hobby, ever think of that? He's not actually employed by ITV, it's alright if he just plays around with it.

The pink and gold colour scheme does work better than blue. I like the serif logo, though. I don't care if it's outdated; bollocks to serif.
JO
Jonny
He's said he wants to learn how to improve, just offering advice, no malice intended.

Better off focusing on one clear design and improving that than persistently scrapping and starting again. And fixing really basic errors that take no time at all to sort out just demonstrates that a bit of care and attention has been put into it. People are likely to be more forgiving then.
HJ
HJL
Jonny posted:
He's said he wants to learn how to improve, just offering advice, no malice intended.

Better off focusing on one clear design and improving that than persistently scrapping and starting again. And fixing really basic errors that take no time at all to sort out just demonstrates that a bit of care and attention has been put into it. People are likely to be more forgiving then.

So what would you like to see from here???
HJ
HJL
Maybe you'll prefer these.
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Last edited by HJL on 11 March 2014 11:17pm - 3 times in total
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AxG
Totally going backwards now.
HJ
HJL
AxG posted:
Totally going backwards now.

Okay, so I've changed the font that you hated, What do you think of the new one?? I know you hated the gradient, so you won't like that! I'll have a look at changing it. What do you think of the colours?? I wanted to amend it to fit with other peoples criticism, so that it was warmer, however perhaps you disagree?? Please help me out by telling me more!!

And what about the Yellow and purple one above?? Is that even worse??
MF
MatthewFirth
Improving all the time.
The main issues now is colour and fonts. Try and make the fonts more breakfast looking, and increase orange and red into the colour.

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