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GMB Today Lower Thirds

The Lower Thirds of GMB Today (August 2017)

FR
freddied056 Meridian (South) South Today
This hasn't taken me long to create, and it's my first ever mock that I have posted. I am expecting bad feedback but please make it constructive so i know what to improve on

I couldn't find the Today logo online, so I've made my own, but just imagine that it's the real one

This is when the show first starts, with just the logo and clock:
https://ibb.co/cQ21U5
I've decided to add a flipper showing the showbiz news during the show, as it fits in more with GMB:
https://ibb.co/k0xwwk
This is the get in touch graphic, and I've also decided that the flipper should show the views of the public during a debate:
https://ibb.co/bZmZhQ
Here is an example of the flipper showing the views:
https://ibb.co/nktEhQ
This is just the same old nametag:
https://ibb.co/mFZy95
This is when there has been breaking entertainment news:
https://ibb.co/jDtrU5
More info about the breaking entertainment:
https://ibb.co/dDOQp5
Coming up:
https://ibb.co/gUbObk
Another example of what's coming up:
https://ibb.co/gkcUGk
When there is an exclusive interview:
https://ibb.co/d4CUGk
Tomorrow on the main program, GMB:
https://ibb.co/kokS2Q
Tomorrow on Today
https://ibb.co/iHhUGk

I hope you like it!
Last edited by freddied056 on 30 August 2017 6:37pm
HB
HarryB Meridian (Thames Valley) South Today
None of the pictures load.
FR
freddied056 Meridian (South) South Today
None of the pictures load.

sorry about that. Just copy and paste the link. Then you should see it
UB
UBox Tyne Tees Look North (North East)
The recreation isn't too inaccurate but it's very rough around the edges with lots of different sized aspects. Take the contact strap; the Facebook, Twitter and Internet logos are totally different sizes. It just makes for an inconsistent and low quality look. If you sort out some of those issues and respect safe zones it'd be better.
DB
dbl London London
Sorry, GMB is such a simple look to recreate. Lack of attention to detail. Thumbs down
FR
freddied056 Meridian (South) South Today
OK. I accept that i have failed on this mock. I am soon going to make an itv news and regional mock that will take the criticism from this mock (such as safe areas) into account
UB
UBox Tyne Tees Look North (North East)
Don't just give in because we've said it's roughly executed. Take the feedback and improve on it.
FR
freddied056 Meridian (South) South Today
UBox posted:
Don't just give in because we've said it's roughly executed. Take the feedback and improve on it.

Ok. I will work on safe areas and the sizes. Hopefully it will be better!
AJ
AJ London London
This hasn't taken me long to create


First and fundamental flaw.

Take more time over them. Don’t share them until 1. You’re happy with them, and 2. You think they’d look great on a TV screen.
DM
DeMarkay London London
Just take time and perfect them Thumbs up

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