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GMB Intro for STV

If STV had logo placement on GMB (January 2015)

HB
HarryB Meridian (Thames Valley) South Today
So what did you actually use to create this?!
DO
dosxuk Yorkshire Look North (Yorkshire)
There's much worse on this forum.


Respectable? Maybe if he sorted the issues that have been pointed out already it could be rated that highly.

Just compare one of the bits he made with the original and tell me his work is respectable...
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Well I am only 14 and not some graphic designer. I like doing mocks because I find it fun and for me at my age that is a pretty respectable level. So yeah ....


One thing about this place you need to cotton on to is that we don't care who you are - you could be a 10 year old with your first computer, or a designer for lambie nairn, you'll still get judged the same.

This isn't school where we're being paid to encourage you to carry on. And while you may think comments are harsh, they are mostly fair.

Do you really want people lying and saying "that's amazing!", when actually, if you got your head down and worked on it for a few more days, you could make it far better?

And I've told countless people this before (most don't listen), bit the most important thing about a mock is describing what you are attempting. If there's something you wanted to do but can't / don't know how to / didn't have time - explain that - you will get judged appropriately, and may get offers of help / explanations / etc. Don't just ignore it and hope nobody notices - we will.

So no, it's not respectable, even for a 14 year old, for this place. Besides, I still don't know what you actually did, it just seems to be made of other peoples work.
FI
FrancisIdents Central (East) Look North (Yorkshire)
Well I am only 14 and not some graphic designer. I like doing mocks because I find it fun and for me at my age that is a pretty respectable level. So yeah ....

Age isn't really an excuse, unless you're 3 and make mocks on an Etch-a-Sketch.


Take on people's advice. The sting needs redoing with proper animations, but the opening itself isn't bad. Use proper fonts like the ITV Reem font (not Segoe UI!), and find some clean music and you might well surprise yourself.
MP
Michael Power World News
I agree with the other people who gave you advice. I am the same age as you but I know my way around Photoshop and Premiere.
If you cannot find the ITV Reem font, there are alternatives such as Neo Sans or similar. With a bit more work, you could make it look very much like the new one. And search for "good morning britain 2015 music" on YouTube.

2/5 for demonstrating a good concept but with poor execution.
MF
MatthewFirth Meridian (South) South Today
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JO
Josh
Not bad,just might wanna improve on trying to get some footage from STV as the ITV logo is clearly visible on the right.The date is a good starting point but that needs quite a lot of improvement.
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