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If STV had logo placement on GMB (January 2015)

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alexhb01
If STV (Scotland) had their logo shown on Good Morning Britain
- Just an idea !
(At the end the presenters audio is a bit delayed)
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DanielK
If STV (Scotland) had their logo shown on Good Morning Britain
- Just an idea !
(At the end the presenters audio is a bit delayed)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vv8A-WbSfxM

Could be better. If you got the clean music and incorporated a regional headline, I'd be impressed. The STV logo at the start doesn't work at all. The point of the wipe in the GMB opener being circular is because of the dot in the ITV logo, if it was STV, I'd diamond wipe from behind the 'tv' triangle and then fade the logo out.

The titles... I dunno about them. The ITV logo is on the titles just because it accompanies the V/O saying '...from ITV studios in London...'. The STV logo is out of place, even if they had logo placement.

If you created the title sequence as if STV would play their own instead of GMB's, you could have a Scottish V/O "Monday, 19th of January, 2015. From the STV newsroom and ITV in London, this is Good Morning Britain" as the same length as the normal GMB one, and in sync with it, and then STV would fade back to GMB in London. IMHO, the only way the STV logo would work on the titles.
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declan
Just got to repeat what Daniel has said. Doesn't seem much time has been given to this as you've just take an image of the logo and applied it to a blank ITV splash screen. If they were to do their own logo at the start it would be the diamond moving and revealing the headlines in the sense the dot does for ITV.

At that I'm not sure they have rights to this as it is ITV breakfast that on between 6-9:30 and not in fact ITV, UTV or STV.
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FrancisIdents
There's much worse on this forum. For what it's worth you've executed this quite well, my only qualm being the "STV" opening, where I think a diamond-shaped animation would work much better than the standard ITV "dot".

Respectable, could do with a bit of work though. 3 stars Smile
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dosxuk
There's much worse on this forum.


That's not an excuse.

For what it's worth you've executed this quite well


Most of it has been executed quite well by ITV, not by the mocker. The bits he has done are either pretty simple, but need major alteration, or completely wrong.

my only qualm being the "STV" opening, where I think a diamond-shaped animation would work much better than the standard ITV "dot".


See - that's one of the few bits he has done, and you're agreeing it's not right.

Respectable, could do with a bit of work though. 3 stars Smile


Respectable? Maybe if he sorted the issues that have been pointed out already it could be rated that highly. It's never going to be an outstanding mock because so little of it has been done by the OP, therefore he needs to work much harder on the bits he has done to get a decent rating.

Just compare one of the bits he made with the original and tell me his work is respectable...
http://home.vis-is.co.uk/data/grabs/alexh_gmb_mock.jpg

I'm sorry, but it's just been thrown together in a few minutes, based entirely on other people's work. 1/5 - because there is an actual original idea behind this (0/5 for implementation).
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Mike W
There's much worse on this forum. For what it's worth you've executed this quite well, my only qualm being the "STV" opening, where I think a diamond-shaped animation would work much better than the standard ITV "dot".

Respectable, could do with a bit of work though. 3 stars Smile

The STV opening being the whole point of the mock. So it's rubbish....

It's fairer to tell the truth than to lie, this is rubbish...
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FrancisIdents
The STV opening being the whole point of the mock. So it's rubbish....

It's fairer to tell the truth than to lie, this is rubbish...

To clarify, I was referring to the STV sting at the start, not the opening 43 seconds in, which is okay. Shame the text is off (Segoe UI font?), but it would look pretty good with a few alterations.


My mistake.
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Brekkie
There's much worse on this forum.


That's not an excuse.

For what it's worth you've executed this quite well


Most of it has been executed quite well by ITV, not by the mocker. The bits he has done are either pretty simple, but need major alteration, or completely wrong.

my only qualm being the "STV" opening, where I think a diamond-shaped animation would work much better than the standard ITV "dot".


See - that's one of the few bits he has done, and you're agreeing it's not right.

Respectable, could do with a bit of work though. 3 stars Smile


Respectable? Maybe if he sorted the issues that have been pointed out already it could be rated that highly. It's never going to be an outstanding mock because so little of it has been done by the OP, therefore he needs to work much harder on the bits he has done to get a decent rating.

Just compare one of the bits he made with the original and tell me his work is respectable...
http://home.vis-is.co.uk/data/grabs/alexh_gmb_mock.jpg

I'm sorry, but it's just been thrown together in a few minutes, based entirely on other people's work. 1/5 - because there is an actual original idea behind this (0/5 for implementation).

To be fair in the real world when nations and regions try to recreate a national look they almost always end up looking like a cheap alternative.

For what it is it does the job, thuogh it would be nice to see a bit more ambition back on this forum and perhaps rather than doing little more than replacing the ITV logo with the STV logo actually create your vision for an STV Breakfast show (a real possibility if the breakfast licence is ever rolled into the main C3 licences).
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lukesams3
Pretty impressive mock, I must say!
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Michael
Pretty impressive mock, I must say!

Must you?
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alexhb01
There's much worse on this forum.


Respectable? Maybe if he sorted the issues that have been pointed out already it could be rated that highly.

Just compare one of the bits he made with the original and tell me his work is respectable...
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Well I am only 14 and not some graphic designer. I like doing mocks because I find it fun and for me at my age that is a pretty respectable level. So yeah ....
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ASO
Listen to the criticisms. Just listen to them, read Guide to Mocking and learn.

1/5 at present. It could be 3/5 if you REALLY work on it.

It's not great but good luck.

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