Freshly Squeezed Studio Mock: This is my first mock. This mock is of Freshly Squeeszed, the breakfast show that features music. - Page 2

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bilky asko 3 April 2013 11:38pm

So you're telling someone to stop using a 'nerdy forum' from the same 'nerdy forum'? People aren't criticising you because they're 'snobs' or because they don't like people, but because this is truly terrible.

And god help us if this was the product of five hours' work.

Okay, I don't sit on this forum all day like most of you guys do, all youse do is sit and watch TV from the thought I got! And yes you are all snobs as I gave some work and it wasn't good enough for your standards, therefore you expect a lot, your all posh snobs. Also yes it wasn't 5 hours it was 1 hour, after I had a break for a while.

The point of The Gallery is for people to post things for critical analysis. It is not a place for people to post things and receive unmitigated praise for their efforts. If we were being snobbish, everyone would tell you to get out. We were being constructive, and giving you advice on how to improve.

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Critique 4 April 2013 12:00am

Martin Dean posted:

Critique posted:

So you're telling someone to stop using a 'nerdy forum' from the same 'nerdy forum'? People aren't criticising you because they're 'snobs' or because they don't like people, but because this is truly terrible.

And god help us if this was the product of five hours' work.

Okay, I don't sit on this forum all day like most of you guys do, all youse do is sit and watch TV from the thought I got! And yes you are all snobs as I gave some work and it wasn't good enough for your standards, therefore you expect a lot, your all posh snobs. Also yes it wasn't 5 hours it was 1 hour, after I had a break for a while.

Ooh, there are some horrible sweeping generalisations there. To say that all we (and I'm assuming you're talking about people who criticise mocks) do is sit and watch TV is a bit rich, as from the assumptions I've made, you're probably an irritable schoolchild in their Easter holidays.

There's nothing more to say when it comes to talking about snobs, as Bilky summed it up quite nicely. I would have thought that even you would realise that mock isn't up to scratch, when comparing it to the other good studio mocks (of which there aren't too many).

And so it didn't take the original 5 hours, *just* one hour and a break, which is still a very long time for something very poor.

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Asa Admin 4 April 2013 12:34am

Martin, it may be your first mock but you only have to compare it to other examples in the forum to see you're quite a way off. You've been given decent constructive feedback from members and have just thrown it back with your petty insults. Given this and your posts elsewhere today, I think your time here has come to an end.

Thread closed.

Freshly Squeezed Studio Mock

This is my first mock. This mock is of Freshly Squeeszed, the breakfast show that features music. (April 2013)