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Mockalong (October 2015)

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WH
Whataday Founding member
I love the typeface at the top, with the crystal on a base. It's a brilliant modern-day version of the original titles.
BA
Bail Moderator
How's this looking for a "fuller" crystal?

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Whataday, dosxuk and Nicky gave kudos
SR
SomeRandomStuff
the crystal did not need to be filled in and the platform is completely unnecessary. These additions are not an improvement.

Bail, please don't turn this into 'design by committee' you will end up with an inferior mock. Go with your original vision.
BA
Bail Moderator
Well no, but when more than one person says it looks empty, all I see is an empty looking hole... so I filled it with triangles. The platform is from the original and not from comments here, I needed another element for the rest of the titles to fly around Smile And I wanted to see if I could do a decent fake reflection Smile
Last edited by Bail on 26 October 2015 11:21pm
SR
SomeRandomStuff
Strange to see this mock going from "Outstanding" down to 4 stars, then up again to "Outstanding" and back down again to 4 stars when it's clearly among the best!!

Some people are clearly incapable of seeing quality. Or there are some seriously spiteful individuals who think tactical voting is acceptable.
BR
Brekkie
the crystal did not need to be filled in and the platform is completely unnecessary. These additions are not an improvement.

Bail, please don't turn this into 'design by committee' you will end up with an inferior mock. Go with your original vision.

Completely disagree with the first point but agree with the second - as nice as it is to see advise taken on board "design by committee" rarely works out well.

Still think the middle is too dark personally, though it looks much better in the animation than in a still.
SR
SomeRandomStuff
Bail posted:
Well no, but when more than one person says it looks empty, all I see is an empty looking hole... so I filled it with triangles. The platform is from the original and not from comments here, I needed another element for the rest of the titles to fly around Smile And I wanted to see if I could do a decent fake reflection Smile

It did look empty, but did not need to be filled.

I,m not saying anything you have done is bad. However, Stylistically, your original crystal design looks far better.

Okay suggestions, how about instead of the platform, using the triangles to fly around and then have them build the crystal at the end?
BA
bilky asko
I think we've found a use here for your BBC News desk in this thread.

This logo could be used on the front of the desk, as the official desk of The Official TV Forum Unofficial Crystal Maze Resurrection Committee.
MD
mdtauk
I like the fuller crystal. Have you considered having hints of light reflected in the background, rather than just plain black?

Also I'm sure you have already considered this, but using the tessellation pattern of the crystal superimposed on the footage for the titles.

And something I'm just throwing out there, is the wireframe maps of the zones, but given the same tessellated treatment as the crystal, only in other colours.

Nice designs BTW, I'm turning it in my head trying to figure out how you are doing it. Element 3D. Meticulously positioned shape layers in 3D space. And is that a red giant plugin for the light rays...
WH
Whataday Founding member
the crystal did not need to be filled in and the platform is completely unnecessary. These additions are not an improvement.

Bail, please don't turn this into 'design by committee' you will end up with an inferior mock. Go with your original vision.


Why not just turn the Post Reply option off altogether then?

There's me thinking the whole point of posting mocks in The Gallery was to gain feedback and take it on board. In my opinion (if I may be so bold as to have one) Bail has done a great job in doing this without compromising his vision.
SR
SomeRandomStuff
the crystal did not need to be filled in and the platform is completely unnecessary. These additions are not an improvement.

Bail, please don't turn this into 'design by committee' you will end up with an inferior mock. Go with your original vision.


Why not just turn the Post Reply option off altogether then?

There's me thinking the whole point of posting mocks in The Gallery was to gain feedback and take it on board. In my opinion (if I may be so bold as to have one) Bail has done a great job in doing this without compromising his vision.

Dont be so daft. Feedback is completely unwanted, as has been shown by many in this gallery, and absolutely nobody takes it on board. Also you are most definitely not allowed to have an opinion.

Facetiousness aside. I dont understand why you think my post is a criticism of your (or others) opinion.

There is such a thing as taking on board too much criticism. We've seen experienced mockers do this frequently. In an attempt to please the 'committee' on this forum they try to add, remove or change everything that is suggested and it has resulted in them losing their original idea. Innovative design is very often squandered when a designer looks for opinion too early in the process and i was worried (as Bail had already incorporated the advice of others into his work) that this would be one of those occasions, hence my politely worded request to Bail to please resist the temptation to try and please everyone. That includes me.

I still think the original pass at this idea was the best. I feel i was very clear, the new additions are not an improvement. Saying something is not an improvement does not mean that it is worse than the original. It is just different. I did not say that Bail had done anything wrong. My rating is still 5/5.

Quite frankly i dont understand why everyone is jumping down my throat just lately over semantics. I'm not posting any differently to how i've always posted.
VM
VMPhil
SomeRandomStuff can come across as harsh with his reviews but I think the forum would be poorer without his opinions. He gets straight to the point. It's not personal (as far as I can tell!).

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