Channel 4 News

I was just messing around and came up with this its just a rough idea.

The Video

http://up.metropol247.co.uk/jjlk/Channel4_4_News.wmv

Tell me what you think.

Wow. From looking at that I made a Jackson Pollock, all over my floor.

It isn't great. I am sure I can hear mouse clicks at the beginning of the movie. It also looks like HyperCam had some problems with text staying on screen for some of the movie.

whats a jackson pollock?

and it wont be mouseclicks as the sound was put in after the recording

http://peculiarvelocity.files.wordpress.com/2009/02/painting_jackson_pollock.jpg

Let's just say that came from my mouth.

ok lol

Title sequence needs work, since there are a lot of flying boxes everywhere. The straps are not bad, but I don't like the bevelling on them, and the live caption needs to come a bit to the right since the text will not be readable.

5/10

Thanks for your coment axg I agree it does need editing as I say its just a rough idea

I can't even see it now ...