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There's my suggestion for state tv of Belarus(about design)
Currently, the design package and branding of this state channel look half-provincinal, in some ways it feels like its local tv. However, I dont want to change news ident, because it looks not bad. But TOTH (news) usually includes ordinary tv watch, there should be countdown, i think/
Heres the current TOTH(news)
Currently logo of this channel looks like this
http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/ru/2/22/1-%D0%B9_%D0%9D%D0%9A%D0%91%D0%A2.jpg
I think its very awful.
There are my variations of tv design
Morning Show
Current branding
http://puu.sh/JSJz
And mine
http://i43.fastpic.ru/big/2012/0718/f3/575614a99cd4060637a49a18eaf988f3.jpg
http://i41.fastpic.ru/big/2012/0718/8f/ac03e079a80e9a741d0242b22e9f168f.jpg
http://i42.fastpic.ru/big/2012/0718/c4/8b4733be167edc78f3a8eafc1b4943c4.jpg
I think this work is not perfect, don't want to show you my previous works as they're much worse than current work.(especially this work was made last week, and its not fit into safe areas
Im still trying to listen to critisism and improve my work.
Anyway, I posted the same mock on DS, as i wasn't able to register on TV Forum, and here's the piece of objective critisism
[QUOTE=Andy B;59679629]The on-screen logo in the corner and clock seems massive and its still not quite in the safe area. (Download the safe area guide from that thread and use it to check) Font wise its a slight improvement, but it would help if it was anti-alised (smooth edges). Try font families that are bold, like Gotham, DIN Pro, Swis.
Also do the straps have to retain red, green and grey? Its not the best colour choice, (I know its the colours of the Belarus flag but you don't necessarily have to stick to it.)
You still got a way to go to improve, I'm afraid, its not the worst mock I've seen but its not great either.
Maybe use graphics packages as a starting point:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ySSWd61YA5o
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sLIKFxi5YgE
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mTgSire07es
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eFckvFCZ-HA
I've PM'd you a link to fonts.[/QUOTE]
Also, German Rudnev made his own variation of it, based on that ticker
http://i42.fastpic.ru/big/2012/0720/31/10ce4a35e077210f8ff25f488592b731.png
Currently, the design package and branding of this state channel look half-provincinal, in some ways it feels like its local tv. However, I dont want to change news ident, because it looks not bad. But TOTH (news) usually includes ordinary tv watch, there should be countdown, i think/
Heres the current TOTH(news)
Currently logo of this channel looks like this
http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/ru/2/22/1-%D0%B9_%D0%9D%D0%9A%D0%91%D0%A2.jpg
I think its very awful.
There are my variations of tv design
Morning Show
Current branding
http://puu.sh/JSJz
And mine
http://i43.fastpic.ru/big/2012/0718/f3/575614a99cd4060637a49a18eaf988f3.jpg
http://i41.fastpic.ru/big/2012/0718/8f/ac03e079a80e9a741d0242b22e9f168f.jpg
http://i42.fastpic.ru/big/2012/0718/c4/8b4733be167edc78f3a8eafc1b4943c4.jpg
I think this work is not perfect, don't want to show you my previous works as they're much worse than current work.(especially this work was made last week, and its not fit into safe areas
Im still trying to listen to critisism and improve my work.
Anyway, I posted the same mock on DS, as i wasn't able to register on TV Forum, and here's the piece of objective critisism
[QUOTE=Andy B;59679629]The on-screen logo in the corner and clock seems massive and its still not quite in the safe area. (Download the safe area guide from that thread and use it to check) Font wise its a slight improvement, but it would help if it was anti-alised (smooth edges). Try font families that are bold, like Gotham, DIN Pro, Swis.
Also do the straps have to retain red, green and grey? Its not the best colour choice, (I know its the colours of the Belarus flag but you don't necessarily have to stick to it.)
You still got a way to go to improve, I'm afraid, its not the worst mock I've seen but its not great either.
Maybe use graphics packages as a starting point:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ySSWd61YA5o
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sLIKFxi5YgE
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mTgSire07es
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eFckvFCZ-HA
I've PM'd you a link to fonts.[/QUOTE]
Also, German Rudnev made his own variation of it, based on that ticker
http://i42.fastpic.ru/big/2012/0720/31/10ce4a35e077210f8ff25f488592b731.png
Last edited by levaniX_4 on 24 July 2012 2:53pm - 3 times in total