BBC2 New Mock Idents

Hi,

If you know my youtube channel, which is - http://www.youtube.com/adamswapitshop , then you might see that I have some mocks of idents on there.

Over the next few weeks, I will be uploading one more each week, until I have a collection of new ones.

It's taken me a while to create these (and the concepts) but here's the first one:

BBC2 - Water Splash

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jKFaigwMAiY

What'dya think?

Subtitles DOG should be inside the safe areas, and it is very monochromatic.

Yes, I am aware of both of those. Will make another version very soon, but it takes a while to render it once started.

Any good comments?

Nice mock, I like the water effect but why not have it bounce of the 2 ?

Nice mock but what did you make it in?

That's very good, but why is it black and white??

Thanks for the comments so far - much appriciated.

Anyway, I made the mocks (and the mocks that will procede it) in Adobe After Effects with a water plugin.

I can make another version and move the "subtitles" to the safe area for 4:3 transmissions, but I'm having trouble trying to add colour. It seems to interfere with the water somehow. I'll look into it.