Agree with others. Has promise, especially the idents.
Sorry, though, I must concur with others. That's a horrible font you've chosen and completely inappropriate for a 'serious' channel like BBC1. Maybe use a '1' in Reem and see how that looks? Or experiment with others?
Keep on, but seriously, ditch that font. It's one step up from Papyrus.
Guess who's big in the back time.
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