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JoshX (previously LuckyC) 584 posts since 21 Dec 2014
I like it! Although, the skidmark-like lines are a bit confusing. If you removed them and put the oneness logo, it would be perfect!

Thanks, I'd appreciate it if you rated my work as it's saying that this was a bad mock. Here's version 2 for you.https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hBsgIm4fgVg


That's normal. The rating is the average and if lots of people but a high rating (like I did) it will have a high rating.

I love it! Would love to see it in more ident forms.
It's not even realistic.
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ClarkToasti82 posts since 8 Apr 2016
Yorkshire Look North (Yorkshire)
I like it! Although, the skidmark-like lines are a bit confusing. If you removed them and put the oneness logo, it would be perfect!

Thanks, I'd appreciate it if you rated my work as it's saying that this was a bad mock. Here's version 2 for you.https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hBsgIm4fgVg


That's normal. The rating is the average and if lots of people but a high rating (like I did) it will have a high rating.

I love it! Would love to see it in more ident forms.

I'm doing it on the moon ident but that's about it for now.
Oh, hello.
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ClarkToasti82 posts since 8 Apr 2016
Yorkshire Look North (Yorkshire)
Thanks, I'd appreciate it if you rated my work as it's saying that this was a bad mock. Here's version 2 for you.https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hBsgIm4fgVg


That's normal. The rating is the average and if lots of people but a high rating (like I did) it will have a high rating.

I love it! Would love to see it in more ident forms.

I'm doing it on the moon ident but that's about it for now.


Just made the moon ident
Oh, hello.
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ClarkToasti82 posts since 8 Apr 2016
Yorkshire Look North (Yorkshire)
The 'ness' in oneness is barely visible when the logo forms.

Fixed it on this version
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=V_L16dIBlX0&feature=youtu.be

Well the logo is prominent and the idents have a common theme both visually and in the soundtrack.

So that's completely unacceptable for BBC1 in 2017.

Just made a bumper which adopts the proper Oneness concept.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2OAbhrQwBIk&feature=youtu.be
Oh, hello.
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