BBC Mock Identities

Hi guys I've started using my YT Channel again and just wondering if anyone would mind giving me some feedback on these, there only rough ideas really so:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZnVSCeTSplU
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FFCMEDdWsLs
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iQF8EpsuXAU

http://www.tvforum.co.uk/thegallery/

Please don't click the links anyone. And mods don't even move it to the Gallery.

1 is some stock footage of a fire being attacked by firefighters, with a hideously large BBC ONE logo faded in.
2 is some stock football footage of Wembley etc, with a hideous recreation of the current BBC One circle motif, only in bright red and with footballs forming the circle.
3 is just two old BBC1 Xmas idents recycled and Instagrammed.

All three have distorted over-loud and over boring V/O.

Truly dreadful. Not worthy of any other comments really, sorry

Dreadful, sorry.

Bloody awful.

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Nah.

Thank you all for your feedbacks, i will take these into account in my future efforts

Try to keep the logos the same because they were really different between the first ident and the second one. Also, the third one is the same as the previous Christmas ident all mashed up. Try to use original ideas for idents. Poor quality but you will improve soon!