- Text and logos are all uncentered.
- BBC One logo is not pure white like it should be, plus a bright red background wouldn't work.
- A lot of the text doesn't suit the channels.
- Why use a black "BBC Two" logo when it blends in with the background?
- Why use the Parliament 'cogs' when it gets in the way of the text?
Overall, it feels like you honestly didn't even try to emulate the styles of these channels and just slapped Reith Sans on backgrounds which clearly don't work. I know that the BBC wouldn't simply rush out these boards lazily, since they already have the materials there to create them.
I can only mirror what the others have said at this point, but don't fret.
It doesn't necessarily have to look detailed. As long as it works and looks nice, that's good.
Here's a mockup I made on PowerPoint in about 5 minutes to show you.
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We made this before we were all asked to stay at home.
Wash your hands and stay away from people who might be ill.
Stay at home and watch your favourite shows on the CBBC iPlayer.
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would have been better for DeMarkay's slide - Something more Newsround-like, whle trying not to be too patronising.
There's a fine line between writing it so a nine year old can understand it and writing it so a nine year old feels alienated. We quite often forget kids are smarter than they let on.
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We made this before we were all asked to stay at home.
Wash your hands and stay away from people who might be ill.
Stay at home and watch your favourite shows on the CBBC iPlayer.
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would have been better for DeMarkay's slide - Something more Newsround-like, whle trying not to be too patronising.
There's a fine line between writing it so a nine year old can understand it and writing it so a nine year old feels alienated. We quite often forget kids are smarter than they let on.
That text looks like it should be on CBeebies. For the relevant programmes, CBBC has text after the titles have played which says ‘Filmed Before Current Restrictions’.