BBC Bristol? in the style of BBC London?

I tried creating BBC Bristol opening titles in the style of the previous BBC London look.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4nY9ExwOC8c&feature=channel_page

Tell me what you think please, thanks. (I'm 16 - not that my age changes what you say - of course lol).


Thanks!

You're looking for the mocks forum... It's over there.

This topic has been moved from Mock Designs

It doesn't help that the look you've based your mock on was perhaps one of the most cheap, bland, unimaginative packages ever produced. So cheap in fact it can be recreated fairly easily, as you have demonstrated here.

As a mock it falls flat largely due to the original package's woefulness (so in many ways it's not entirely your fault!). I therefore suggest you put a bit more thought into which region you use as a basis for your mock next time; might I suggest North West Tonight 2007-2008?

Nice to see you tried to use Vegas [/sarcasm]

How many pages is it saying there is in this thread!?

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Back to the mock and it's alright but without the red and white bars it is mainly just a slideshow with a red bar and logo at the top.

The pictures you have used makes you think that Bristol is dull, maybe use some more slightly invigorating images or time lapse clips?