Long time visitor, first time commenter.
I really love what you’ve done with this! I have begun to wane on the BBC One presentation lately, I enjoy the logo but I think it could be brought into a more contemporary setting and I would love to see you explore that aspect as otherwise the logo you’ve continued with is fine.
I know you’ve put some pulses and textures in the background, the BBC Two one is a little too simplistic for me, however the actual logo is exactly what I thought we would get years ago when they revamped BBC One. I think replacing the existing logo with this and using their current wave presentation would look really good.
Three I prefer your second attempt, I can imagine the outline as an animation and the logo filling up but it does look better on your re-design. I’m a big fan of the current II! but I like that you’ve incorporated the ! Into this and I still think that as a shorthand version of the logo you could still do something similar. I don’t mind the curved edges too much as you can see the origin of the typeface with the other logos.
To echo what everyone else has said, Four is amazing and it’s so overdue a new look. I think this would really help bring Four to life in a way that can be high-brow and artistic without feeling stuffy and dated. Again, you can see the origin of the typeface so I don’t mind that it strays from the others.
Cbeebies is another one that is way overdue and I like what you’ve done however unlike the other designs, it worked better in your first attempt where’s it was stacked. The BBC logo on the left works on the others because it reads “BBC One” etc, however this reads “BBC Cbeebies” and it’s you done the same for CBBC it would be “BBC CBBC” which doesn’t work. I think that would work as you had previously done it as Cbeebies works as it’s own brand without having to have the BBC logo so prominently featured.
I can see why others dislike the lowercase News but I quite like it. A suggestion would be making making it bold, I think having it lowercase in its current state makes it looks quite casual - making it bold may not make it better but it could bring it more in line with the others and thus further the consistency. Sport, again I don’t mind it being italic, I would also be curious to see it more in line with One, Two just to see if it can come to life with the visuals of the presentation rather than the typeface.
Would also be interested to see how you would do Parliament and Weather. However this is really good work, I signed up and came out of silence to tell you pretty much that. I would love to see this evolve further!
Wow, thanks so much for your amazing and extensive feedback! Really appreciate the fact you've signed up just to tell me all of that 😊 I'm going to try and explore the identities again further soon so watch this space!