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CR
Critique
JK08 posted:
SomeRandomStuff posted:
what I don't understand is how he cant see how truly aweful they are.


''what I don't understand is how she cant see how truly aweful they are.''

Fixed it.


You haven't fixed it, actually. It would be:

Quote:
What I don't understand is how she can't see how truly awful they are.


And, any Metropol user would know your gender, of female.
JK
JK08
Critique posted:
JK08 posted:
SomeRandomStuff posted:
what I don't understand is how he cant see how truly aweful they are.


''what I don't understand is how she cant see how truly aweful they are.''

Fixed it.


You haven't fixed it, actually. It would be:

Quote:
What I don't understand is how she can't see how truly awful they are.


And, any Metropol user would know your gender, of female.


Thank you Critique, If its giving me feedback from my work I'm grateful but I just don't understand how james can know my gender without knowing me.
JO
Jonny
Er, because you had pointedly corrected someone's post changing "he" to "she".

Oh and no-one cares.
JA
james
JK08 posted:
Critique posted:
JK08 posted:
SomeRandomStuff posted:
what I don't understand is how he cant see how truly aweful they are.


''what I don't understand is how she cant see how truly aweful they are.''

Fixed it.


You haven't fixed it, actually. It would be:

Quote:
What I don't understand is how she can't see how truly awful they are.


And, any Metropol user would know your gender, of female.


Thank you Critique, If its giving me feedback from my work I'm grateful but I just don't understand how james can know my gender without knowing me.


I never said I did. If I had to guess I would think at least 80% of people on TV Forum are males so I just assumed. I have nothing against anyone on this forum. I just have a problem with your cr*p mocks.
SR
SomeRandomStuff
james posted:
JK08 posted:
Critique posted:
JK08 posted:
SomeRandomStuff posted:
what I don't understand is how he cant see how truly aweful they are.


''what I don't understand is how she cant see how truly aweful they are.''

Fixed it.


You haven't fixed it, actually. It would be:

Quote:
What I don't understand is how she can't see how truly awful they are.


And, any Metropol user would know your gender, of female.


Thank you Critique, If its giving me feedback from my work I'm grateful but I just don't understand how james can know my gender without knowing me.


I never said I did. If I had to guess I would think at least 80% of people on TV Forum are males so I just assumed. I have nothing against anyone on this forum. I just have a problem with your cr*p mocks.

All this fuss over one letter "s". My apologies JK08, i am not a metropol user so was ill informed, part of the problem with gender non-specific screen names.

As for the person who corrected the capital letter in "what"... go fu... erm... stop being such a grammar nazi. Very Happy

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