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BBC 2020 Rebrand Project

Celebrating the BBC's centenary with a stronger identity. (June 2020)

DM
DeMarkay London London
DavidWhitfield posted:
I would suggest that you are in danger of coming across rather cocky at times, however.

I would suggest, politely , that you think about how you wish to come across when inviting people to provide constructive feedback and help you to improve your work.



David, you said it better than I could. He might be good at designing, but he does come across as very cocky. I think a certain thing called humble would do him massive favours.
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Ne1L C Yorkshire Look North (Yorkshire)
DeMarkay posted:
DavidWhitfield posted:
I would suggest that you are in danger of coming across rather cocky at times, however.

I would suggest, politely , that you think about how you wish to come across when inviting people to provide constructive feedback and help you to improve your work.



David, you said it better than I could. He might be good at designing, but he does come across as very cocky. I think a certain thing called humble would do him massive favours.


Agreed. He is very good but there's a streak of undiluted arrogance that is very offputting. Humility costs nothing but it's value is un-measurable

My criticism is that the BBC Est 1922 logo looks like an unfinished tombstone.
JA
Jake Central (East) East Midlands Today
Jon posted:
What I would say about trailer end boards is, I’d keep the concept of the individual patterns but add some uniformity by trying to keep the text and the logos in the same place for all channels.

Agree with this, would help a lot.
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DavidWhitfield Tyne Tees Look North (North East)
Jake posted:
Jon posted:
What I would say about trailer end boards is, I’d keep the concept of the individual patterns but add some uniformity by trying to keep the text and the logos in the same place for all channels.

Agree with this, would help a lot.

Agree with this, Jon/Jake.

Also, to my eyes, the thick black outline makes the text on the CBeeBies image a little hard to read. Maybe try with a thinner outline, or none at all.

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W1LL Yorkshire Look North (E.Yorks & Lincs)
DeMarkay posted:
DavidWhitfield posted:
I would suggest that you are in danger of coming across rather cocky at times, however.

I would suggest, politely , that you think about how you wish to come across when inviting people to provide constructive feedback and help you to improve your work.



David, you said it better than I could. He might be good at designing, but he does come across as very cocky. I think a certain thing called humble would do him massive favours.

How rich.
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BiggieSMLZ Granada North West Today
I've managed to make some tweaks to the other endboards, thus giving them some uniformity. All five entertainment channels should share the same endboard animation (besides the varying patterns). Also, the "2" curve looks more like a proper curve!

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Speaking of adjustments, I adjusted the CBeebies endboard by making the outline less thick.

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Ahh, the joys of TV.
FL
flipps
Much better
DM
DeeMartie UTV Newsline
DeMarkay posted:
DavidWhitfield posted:
I would suggest that you are in danger of coming across rather cocky at times, however.

I would suggest, politely , that you think about how you wish to come across when inviting people to provide constructive feedback and help you to improve your work.



David, you said it better than I could. He might be good at designing, but he does come across as very cocky. I think a certain thing called humble would do him massive favours.

Look who's talking..
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BiggieSMLZ Granada North West Today
flipps posted:
Much better

Thank you very much! Smile
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DM
DeMarkay London London
BiggieSMLZ posted:
I've managed to make some tweaks to the other endboards, thus giving them some uniformity. All five entertainment channels should share the same endboard animation (besides the varying patterns). Also, the "2" curve looks more like a proper curve!

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Speaking of adjustments, I adjusted the CBeebies endboard by making the outline less thick.

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Very nice!
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all new Phil Recently warned Yorkshire Look North (Yorkshire)
I think this is brilliant. It brings the BBC right up to date, which is sorely needed. Well done.
DW
DavidWhitfield Tyne Tees Look North (North East)
I think the BBC Four one in particular is an improvement as you'd find it hard to fill the triangular gap you've left in version one. CBeeBies is easier to read now, too, and I like the exclamation mark in the logo which I must have missed first time around. Nicely done. Good you see you acting on feedback and making positive changes. Nice work.
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