I've asked you once already to expand on this idea so we at least have a clue of what you're trying to do (so you can get better feedback) and all you said was "I want to show off my original concept" - hardly helpful. So the best feedback I can give you is explain your concept! Why did you pick that font? Why did you pick the 1999 Carlton logo? What exactly are you trying to do here?
I picked the Carlton logo because I like the star shape and I like its dynamic pattern. I picked the eras bold font and my kabel-style font because it displays my personality (in my opinion) I like it. I may stop doing this mock and move on to something else.
Wow. If the horse wasn't dead before it most certainly is now.
AlexEdohHD13, Fan of BBC, ITV, and Channel 4 Programmes.