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An Original Concept of mine (September 2017)

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NJ
Neil Jones Founding member
Much better. Less is always more.
AE
AlexEdohHD13
Much better. Less is always more.

Okay. I accept that.
DB
dbl
The background is less distracting in attempt 2, however, I would change the font. It gives off classic vibes, which doesn't suit.
AE
AlexEdohHD13
dbl posted:
The background is less distracting in attempt 2, however, I would change the font. It gives off classic vibes, which doesn't suit.

I quite like this font.
DO
dosxuk
It gives me Gill Sans Ultra Bold vibes - which is never a good thing.
AE
AlexEdohHD13
It gives me Gill Sans Ultra Bold vibes - which is never a good thing.

But it's not Gil Sans Ultra.
AA
Aaron_2015
It gives me Gill Sans Ultra Bold vibes - which is never a good thing.

But it's not Gil Sans Ultra.


Do you actually want any feedback? You seem extremely defensive and unwilling to take on comments. I'm not going to waste my time putting together some constructive feedback if you're going to simply dismiss it without a second thought.
AE
AlexEdohHD13
It gives me Gill Sans Ultra Bold vibes - which is never a good thing.

But it's not Gil Sans Ultra.


Do you actually want any feedback? You seem extremely defensive and unwilling to take on comments. I'm not going to waste my time putting together some constructive feedback if you're going to simply dismiss it without a second thought.

I do take feedback very seriously. I am sorry if you get the impression that I don't.
NJ
Neil Jones Founding member
You don't need to "take feedback seriously" as such, this isn't A-Level Design & Art class where your practical assignment is 80% of your final grade.

Rather than replying "okay" or "but this is <insert some throwback remark here>" to everything you might want to expand on why you've chosen to do stuff the way you have. This is your new concept, nobody else knows what you've trying to achieve if you don't explain it. It's your prerogative if you want to ignore or take/build on the comments you get - some of which you may not like.
AE
AlexEdohHD13
You don't need to "take feedback seriously" as such, this isn't A-Level Design & Art class where your practical assignment is 80% of your final grade.

Rather than replying "okay" or "but this is <insert some throwback remark here>" to everything you might want to expand on why you've chosen to do stuff the way you have. This is your new concept, nobody else knows what you've trying to achieve if you don't explain it. It's your prerogative if you want to ignore or take/build on the comments you get - some of which you may not like.

Thanks, I'll take this into account. I made this mock because I wanted to show of my original concept (something different).
OR
orange
I'm sorry but what is this mock trying to be?

My own concept

Yet it's literally the Carlton logo with your name slapped on it.
The fonts you've used are very garish and outdated, something you'd probably not see on any new TV branding because well... they're outdated and clunky.
The first concept was way too cluttered and the second is very very bland.
Overall a really dry mock.
MY
MY83
I thought the kids were back in school.

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