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An Original Concept of mine (September 2017)

AE
AlexEdohHD13 London London
Hello Everyone, I have decided to make an original concept. This is my concept of presentation (My branding).

This concept is based on my logo. (I created it myself, The ALEX EDOH logo is based on the 1999 Carlton logo).

Ident:

I made the music myself.

Breakbumper


Promo Styles (Templates)
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Lineup Styles (Templates)
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I made the font based on the (freely available) 'Kabel Ultra' font. I tweaked some bits.
Last edited by AlexEdohHD13 on 2 September 2017 5:45pm
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AG
AxG Yorkshire Look North (Yorkshire)
There's far too much clutter in the background.
AE
AlexEdohHD13 London London
AxG posted:
There's far too much clutter in the background.

I made that background myself with the design. So how is there too much clutter?
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AG
AxG Yorkshire Look North (Yorkshire)
AxG posted:
There's far too much clutter in the background.

I made that background myself with the design. So how is there too much clutter?

Having four programme slots along with the background with criss-cross lines, rings, and star. Too much going on when a simple blurring would make sure that the programme names are the clearest thing.
AE
AlexEdohHD13 London London
AxG posted:
AxG posted:
There's far too much clutter in the background.

I made that background myself with the design. So how is there too much clutter?

Having four programme slots along with the background with criss-cross lines, rings, and star. Too much going on when a simple blurring would make sure that the programme names are the clearest thing.

Okay
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WL
W1LL Yorkshire Look North (E.Yorks & Lincs)
I'm sorry but what is this mock trying to be?
AE
AlexEdohHD13 London London
I'm sorry but what is this mock trying to be?

My own concept
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NJ
Neil Jones Founding member Central (West) Midlands Today
Background of the slides, as stated is far too busy and far too prominent. Either make it lighter, fade/blur it out or remove it. Otherwise you'd distract from the key information.
AE
AlexEdohHD13 London London
Background of the slides, as stated is far too busy and far too prominent. Either make it lighter, fade/blur it out or remove it. Otherwise you'd distract from the key information.

Okay.
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DW
DavidWhitfield Tyne Tees Look North (North East)
You need to think about the logistics of what you're doing. Take the upcoming programmes graphic - you've got four single line pieces of information but the lines of text are only big enough to display 'programme [number]' - What if you were to air Ant & Dec's Saturday Night Takeaway or I'm A Celebrity, Get Me Out Of Here? You need to be prepared for any eventuality when you make templates like these.

Also, others are right - the background is far too busy and distracting.
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AE
AlexEdohHD13 London London
You need to think about the logistics of what you're doing. Take the upcoming programmes graphic - you've got four single line pieces of information but the lines of text are only big enough to display 'programme [number]' - What if you were to air Ant & Dec's Saturday Night Takeaway or I'm A Celebrity, Get Me Out Of Here? You need to be prepared for any eventuality when you make templates like these.

Also, others are right - the background is far too busy and distracting.

I will accommodate the menu for long name titles.
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AE
AlexEdohHD13 London London
Okay, I have read your comments on the background and have changed it slightly so it's less busy.
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Lineup Styles
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