ABC VHS Break Bumper

Using this tutorial:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bQ-4nOQixQw

I created this:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cxDUkU0Aqxg

Helpful criticism please

Looks in all honesty like one of those 3D images with a green and red tint, only in this case it's pink and green. If you want to do a VHS look you'd do better in reality starting with something that VHS can, given half a chance, make a right hack of, as demonstrated here:

Like I said I'm just following the tutorials. I'll watch the video and see what I can glean. Thanks.