There comes a point where you know when to quit. I've reached that point. Some people are capable of great mocks. I'm not one of those people.
This will be my last mock. I know I've said that before but this time I mean it.
Thanks for the resposnes and special hanks to DavidWhitfield
Sorry but I think I have to say something:
You've been told multiple times now in multiple different ways that you will not make good mocks in two seconds flat. You need to make shed loads of crap, really crap and CWilliams level of crap mocks before you get any better. Most of these won't need to be posted but its the only way you learn unfortunately.
Everything I posted in the previous threads you've pretty much ignored. Everything others have posted in threads you've pretty much ignored. You'll probably ignore most of what's in this thread too, because I get the impression you want to run but you don't want to learn how to walk. So all I'm going to say is make a load of crap mocks, learn from them, learn why they're crap and learn from them again.
I'm not sure in all honesty what else you need to be told - if you don't want to listen or take heed then that's up to you. But if you want 5 star reviews for a mock you have to earn it. I'm pretty sure Sting didn't top the charts by just wandering into a studio one day and recording a half-arsed rendition of some Beatles song.