Seriously, it looks garish and awful, but worse than that, it clearly didn't take you long. There is no real concept, you haven't provided any explanation as to what it is, how you made it or what you were trying to achieve. Why should I take it seriously? If you can provide these things, and evidence that you sat down and thought about this mock before posting it, I will gladly post something a little more substantial and constructive.
Experience doesn't excuse using that god awful font on EVERY one of your mocks. Also, why are there random words all over it, it's the Daily Mail's exploded.
no problem xwing , Sorry the font is so bad but it's not on EVERY one of my mocks, the daybreak one I replaced it with one of the Sans Serif types calm down. I agree with the words, I can see this mock has gone to pot, I'll make sure I review it properly before posting it, plus I quite like those fonts, I don't have many to choose from and these professional ones cost
Last edited by jaggyroad on 26 August 2010 10:21pm
The font isn't the main issue here though, or we'd all be saying 'nice, though you may wish to rethink the font'. But no, we're saying it's a big disgusting mess that you haven't put any effort into.
