BBC news (again)

What would it look like if BBC news had big your face American style news graphics?

http://i151.photobucket.com/albums/s131/Surfer_Dude_25/plain.jpg

http://i151.photobucket.com/albums/s131/Surfer_Dude_25/story-1.jpg

http://i151.photobucket.com/albums/s131/Surfer_Dude_25/breaking.jpg

http://i151.photobucket.com/albums/s131/Surfer_Dude_25/comingup.jpg

Breakfast would be a bit calmer

http://i151.photobucket.com/albums/s131/Surfer_Dude_25/breakfast.jpg

I didn't intend on making these so if you wont to say stuff about them go ahead
there not meant to be great but i made them so might as well share them.

interesting mock but u need 2 make the colours brighter as they are a bit bland personally

Well Done Surfer Dude, exellent mock making skill you have! i paticulary like the gold one and the general colour scheme of them all - apart from the Coming up Aston, it looks a bit slaped on to me and i don't think it would fit with the graphics so try and re work that one,

Other than that Well Done Son!

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Words a squashed together to much.
Dark colour writing on dark background dont work

http://www.clicksmilies.com/s1106/wuerg/vomit-smiley-007.gif

Totally and inexhaustively awful. Just give it up right now.

0/4 - I'm being generous.

Listen, Sufer Dude, don't listen to people when they say your mocks are excellent. They are poor. If you really want to continue making 'mocks', then spend a bit of time thinking about what you're going to do, before you do it. And, don't post it until you are totally happy with it.

Overall I agree that these mocks have room for improvement, but I would like to see the creator work on them a bit more developing some alternative graphics along that theme.
8/10.

This is what i am going to do, i will not post anymore mocks for a while (relief maybe to some) and once i am happy with what i have then ill post it.

My problem with the graphics is that they aren't "In Your Face" like you said they were. They look a bit small and cramped. If you want to make them US-Style use bigger and bolder fonts and brighter colours. There is some room for improvement here, so don't be too disappointed. You can only get better.

2.5/4

It was supposed to be like that.He said big in your face american graphics.

Just for that I'm giving him 4/4.

But American Graphics, aren't like that at all though.

You didn't have to be brutal.