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You need to spend more than 30 seconds on a mock to even be in with a chance of getting more than 1 star / not being ridiculed by everyone on this site.
I've literally just spent less than 10 minutes making this version of your mock, including the time to find the images and load my tools up, and yeah, it's a bit dull, but at least there's some visual interest, and an attempt at lining things up in a consistent manner.
It's always being pointed out, but as a new mocker I'll let you off for not knowing RULE #1 - Can you see it being used on TV - that doesn't mean it needs to be perfect, but it does mean you need to make it look more interesting than a screenshot of a word document.
I've literally just spent less than 10 minutes making this version of your mock, including the time to find the images and load my tools up, and yeah, it's a bit dull, but at least there's some visual interest, and an attempt at lining things up in a consistent manner.
It's always being pointed out, but as a new mocker I'll let you off for not knowing RULE #1 - Can you see it being used on TV - that doesn't mean it needs to be perfect, but it does mean you need to make it look more interesting than a screenshot of a word document.