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TV Forum - fictional topic image: what to correct?

I can understand that something is wrong, but what? (November 2009)

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GR
German Rudnev
For Network Six forum, I made the image for fictional topic discussed over there, about now-owned by my company NI franchise emerald1. It was rather quick, so I want to ask: what to correct?
I know already that the topic with about 400 posts cannot be fit into 208 pages, but are there any mistakes?

And here's this 'mock' (well, not - it's like an ident remix and the genuine ident compared):
http://i559.photobucket.com/albums/ss32/germanrudnev/Emerald%20Television/Remake/TVF.jpg
Last edited by German Rudnev on 30 November 2009 2:17pm
CH
Chie
It looks fine.
PE
Pete Founding member
I am confused
CR
Critique
As am I, I have absolutley no idea what you're saying. I see no difference.
CH
chris
I think he/she's created a fictional topic for TV Forum and wants to check to see if it looks authentic.

I wouldn't know the difference in my opinion.
GR
German Rudnev
Probably I didn't outline this, so...

1) As a part of preparing to take over fictional Network Six franchise, I decided to show that it's discussing somewhere , such as here. As posting the real topic on fictional franchise on real TV-related forum would be overkill , so, I decided to 'mock' it as the picture. (And somehow it was a challenge - e.g. that spacing that italics always made there, such as this .

2) As it was done rather quick , I feel it has some things which make it un-authentic , such as '400 posts on 200 pages' and on, so, I shared this mock to ask are there any things which are wrong .

3) I'm male . Name: German (Latin: 'warrior', 'German' (as nation)). Surname: Rudnev .
FE
Felek
The text tracking or font looks wrong.
JO
Joe
You should have just used Firebug - http://getfirebug.com/ - to change the text.

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