Mock Designs

ITV1 Break Bumpers!!

First ever mock (January 2006)

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philMID
My first mock ever- ITV break bumpers

For a first- What do you think? ( I am getting some better software soon)
Please comment Smile


http://www.rp-networkservices.com/tvforum/uploads/itv111.jpg
http://www.rp-networkservices.com/tvforum/uploads/itv1breakbumpr.jpg
JA
jay Founding member
Not another one Rolling Eyes
KE
keithgreer
The mock is terrible, but I can imagine the idea of the coloured bars wiping across the screen quickly. Could be used on all channels, changing the logo of course.
MA
Matrix
keithgreer posted:
The mock is terrible, but I can imagine the idea of the coloured bars wiping across the screen quickly. Could be used on all channels, changing the logo of course.


Umm, very Channel 4 but very basic. I suggest you go back and work on this...
DB
dbl
philMID posted:
My first mock ever- ITV break bumper

its not that good is it? what do you think?

http://www.rp-networkservices.com/tvforum/uploads/itv1breakbump.jpg

Proper ITV1 logo:
http://tvmocks.thetvroomplus.com/images-logos/itv1-06.png
I can see the idea, it needs sprucing up.
NI
Nini
I don't know, it's not really saying very much at all is it?
JA
jay Founding member
philMID posted:
its not that good is it? what do you think?


I agree with you.
CD
cdd
I don't find this mock worth commenting on... "Mock Designs" is very approrpriate for the sort of junk in this forum!

Regardless of your mock, do NOT compress the images. You're not doing any favours for yourself by doing so. Keep them at full quality (but NOT full size!) and people look at it in a different light.
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tvchris
the only mocks that ever get feedback are ones that arent that brillaint and first-timer mockers.

Why dont people comment on better designed mocks?

its much harder to be nice than nasty!
JA
jay Founding member
tvchris posted:

Why dont people comment on better designed mocks?


Because it's something this forum lacks.
FC
Freeview Cool Man
I like the idea with the nice colours along the side but I do think that it could perhaps a bit more colourful. Maybe you could think about making the logo a bit better and the colours along the side brighter and slightly thicker. Very Happy
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thediaryroom
I can see how that would work on TV, and it could be used on all the itv channels (with different logos, obviously!) as it uses all the colours from the logos.

But you need to use the proper logos, just to tidy it up a bit. And why not try animating it, if you've got flash. Smile

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