ITV1 Break Bumpers!!

My first mock ever- ITV break bumpers

For a first- What do you think? ( I am getting some better software soon)
Please comment


http://www.rp-networkservices.com/tvforum/uploads/itv111.jpg
http://www.rp-networkservices.com/tvforum/uploads/itv1breakbumpr.jpg

Not another one

The mock is terrible, but I can imagine the idea of the coloured bars wiping across the screen quickly. Could be used on all channels, changing the logo of course.

Umm, very Channel 4 but very basic. I suggest you go back and work on this...

Proper ITV1 logo:
http://tvmocks.thetvroomplus.com/images-logos/itv1-06.png
I can see the idea, it needs sprucing up.

I don't know, it's not really saying very much at all is it?

I agree with you.

I don't find this mock worth commenting on... "Mock Designs" is very approrpriate for the sort of junk in this forum!

Regardless of your mock, do NOT compress the images. You're not doing any favours for yourself by doing so. Keep them at full quality (but NOT full size!) and people look at it in a different light.

the only mocks that ever get feedback are ones that arent that brillaint and first-timer mockers.

Why dont people comment on better designed mocks?

its much harder to be nice than nasty!

Because it's something this forum lacks.

I like the idea with the nice colours along the side but I do think that it could perhaps a bit more colourful. Maybe you could think about making the logo a bit better and the colours along the side brighter and slightly thicker.

I can see how that would work on TV, and it could be used on all the itv channels (with different logos, obviously!) as it uses all the colours from the logos.

But you need to use the proper logos, just to tidy it up a bit. And why not try animating it, if you've got flash.