First of all don't ask for people to not to be nasty, because people aren't generally nasty. People give constructive criticism and if you can’t take criticism, then don’t mock.
On to my comments…
…I really like it! It’s simple and understated; it’s not fussy and I like that. It would look good on TV screens. But perhaps you should take a look at this page which explains aspect ratios and safe areas.
We all ignore them on our first mock (well I did!) but be aware of them next time.
Please don't be too harsh, You've got to understand I'm only 13 and us 13 year olds dont have much credibility.
Don't be nasty because it makes me cry
ricky h
I know, and I understand. Apart from people moaning at mockers who can't mock, give them ADVICE for crying out loud. It's helpful, and won't make them upset and get them down, just like some who I could recall the name of.
Please don't be too harsh, You've got to understand I'm only 13 and us 13 year olds dont have much credibility.
hi, I'm reading this forum for months and I think it's time for me to post some mocks well, why everybody is saying this lately? being 13 is not an excuse..
Please don't be too harsh, You've got to understand I'm only 13 and us 13 year olds dont have much credibility.
hi, I'm reading this forum for months and I think it's time for me to post some mocks well, why everybody is saying this lately? being 13 is not an excuse..
Imagery: simple and sequential - nice bevels on graphics
Construction: a bit bland, not much imagination
Mock Quality: Good - but the Sky News logo looks like an afterthought
Originality: Not a lot - just a revolution of the current look. Try a little more imagination
CS Mark: 7/10