My mocks

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These are really quite awful.
It's quite impossible to even catch onto an interesting concept if I was to disregard the...technical ability being displayed.
I would spend several weeks alone with a copy of Photoshop and a very big book before trying again.

I'm sorry but the use of my ITV1 mock is probably the best thing about these, and even that wasn't one of my best mocks. Sorry!

Sorry to say- but if i had seen these mocks on telly, id run away cos id fear it might explode!! They arnt really mocks, as Lee said, you taken one of his mocks and used if w/o permission* (i added). Sorry, but 0/10!!

it is my first try and im only 13

Sorry, but may I strongly recommend that before you post to breifly stop and think 'if that was someone elses mock what would I think of it'. If the answer is 'poor' or similar then it's best not to post it.

My advice in regards to the image on the left would be not to use WordArt or whatever you used on the bottom which badly squashed the text. Also the red rectangles do not line up, leaving messy-shaped black gaps.

You're going to need to spend a lot more time, and put a lot more thought into these mocks and into design itself before you can expect to get good comments from people on this forum.

I'm sorry but your age isn't swaying my opinion. This isn't a very good place to post a first mock if you just want good comments. People who give you bad feedback about your mocks are not necessarily bad people, they are often the ones you need to listen to.

I'm not saying never post a mock again, but just put more time and effort into the design, and if you're not good at design, put some effort into explaining your idea.

Im 13 and my first try were better then this as i used Powerpoint (which was good at the time) plus i was 9 at the time. So really, get the softwear and dont post any up for a while!!

If you own PowerPoint, and Paint Shop Pro, but can't use it, read this:

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I'm 13 too but I wouldn't dare make a mock as bad as that and make a new thread about it!

They'd only be slightly barable on April Fool's Day!

Might I suggest you go and learn how to use apostrophes and capital letters properly before attempting to mock or post?

Even so ... it's crap!! I mean look at it. What's there to be proud of?? What is it? What does it do? What is its purpose? How much work was put into it until you thought "hmm ... perfect. I'll upload it straight away"?