Sky One

Okay, it's my first mock, and all I have is PowerPoint (Well, I can't use PSP) I am good at making mocks on the actual PowerPoint Slide Shows, but not that good at images.

All I have done is Sky One mocks. Please be honest, but please be kind at the same time.

The ident shows different screenshots of shows, then animation of the logo's flying and fading in. (If you want an aniamtion, I can try one)

Here it is

http://www.rp-networkservices.com/tvforum/uploads/sky1.jpg

Please be kind

Quite nice as an idea, however, one improvement would probably be to have one picture as the main background for the ident and perhaps set the box backing the 1 to semitransparent, or move it to have it as a sidebar.

Is this what you mean? (I couldn't remember the font I used for the 1 so I changed it)

http://www.rp-networkservices.com/tvforum/uploads/sky12.jpg

Well, yes, that's by far an improvement, much neater. However, I'd move the bar down the middle to one side of the page, since it looks much cleaner and doesn't obscure the action. That way the channel's name can be seen to frame the programme, rather than dwarf it

Do you have an example, 'cause I don't get you.

Well, I've played around a little bit. This is what I meant by moving the blue bar to one side:

http://www.rp-networkservices.com/tvforum/uploads/sky1_copy1.jpg

Also had a look at the logo. I don't like the one I've done though! But it gives you an idea of what I was getting at.

I get it:

http://www.rp-networkservices.com/tvforum/uploads/sky123.jpg

A Next Caption? Oh what the hell

http://www.rp-networkservices.com/tvforum/uploads/skytr.jpg

Any comments?